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A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)

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A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by Lunan   » Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:42 am

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Toni gave us a snippet lat night
"
March, 1922 Post Diaspora
"Trust me, the hole would've been a hell of a lot deeper!"
— Ensign Helen Zilwicki,
Royal Manticoran Navy
"

she is just as evil as Himself
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by Howard T. Map-addict   » Thu Aug 16, 2012 11:06 am

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Lunan, thank you for quoting the whole snippet for us!

HTM

Lunan wrote:Toni gave us a snippet lat night
"
March, 1922 Post Diaspora
"Trust me, the hole would've been a hell of a lot deeper!"
— Ensign Helen Zilwicki,
Royal Manticoran Navy
"
Lunan
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by blackjack217   » Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:31 pm

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Lunan wrote:Toni gave us a snippet lat night
"
March, 1922 Post Diaspora
"Trust me, the hole would've been a hell of a lot deeper!"
— Ensign Helen Zilwicki,
Royal Manticoran Navy
"

she is just as evil as Himself

Maybe just as evil, but not as effective. This tiny snippet doesn't really have me itching for more the way Himself's snippets do. It really doesn't have the same "Damn you, why did you stop there" effect his have.
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by rdt   » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:36 pm

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blackjack217 wrote:
Lunan wrote:Toni gave us a snippet lat night
"
March, 1922 Post Diaspora
"Trust me, the hole would've been a hell of a lot deeper!"
— Ensign Helen Zilwicki,
Royal Manticoran Navy
"

she is just as evil as Himself

Maybe just as evil, but not as effective. This tiny snippet doesn't really have me itching for more the way Himself's snippets do. It really doesn't have the same "Damn you, why did you stop there" effect his have.


The date seems to be familiar. Where have I seen it before? Oh, I know.
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by Lunan   » Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:12 pm

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same as elizabith's quote in ART

rdt wrote:
blackjack217 wrote:
Lunan wrote:Toni gave us a snippet lat night
"
March, 1922 Post Diaspora
"Trust me, the hole would've been a hell of a lot deeper!"
— Ensign Helen Zilwicki,
Royal Manticoran Navy
"

she is just as evil as Himself

Maybe just as evil, but not as effective. This tiny snippet doesn't really have me itching for more the way Himself's snippets do. It really doesn't have the same "Damn you, why did you stop there" effect his have.


The date seems to be familiar. Where have I seen it before? Oh, I know.
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by rdt   » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:08 pm

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Toni posted yet another meager:

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"Well, this is an interestin' development," Rear Admiral Michael Oversteegen drawled.

Michelle Henke restrained an urge to hit him over the head. It was difficult.

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Satisfying, no? No!
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by rdt   » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:12 pm

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Lunan wrote:same as elizabith's quote in ART



Right! Therefore, overlap, concurrent events, whatever!
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by Thirdbase   » Sat Aug 18, 2012 3:27 pm

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rdt wrote:Toni posted yet another meager:

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"Well, this is an interestin' development," Rear Admiral Michael Oversteegen drawled.

Michelle Henke restrained an urge to hit him over the head. It was difficult.

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Satisfying, no? No!


I still claim that doesn't count as a snippet, because it occurs every day.
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runsforcelery wrote:
Thirdbase wrote:I think that was the next novel.



Allow me to demonstrate my concision, brevity, and economy of phrase:

"Smart alec!" ;p
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by Lunan   » Sat Aug 18, 2012 7:54 pm

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If you look at the bar. Toni has promised us an entire chapter. Oh my...

Thirdbase wrote:
rdt wrote:Toni posted yet another meager:

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"Well, this is an interestin' development," Rear Admiral Michael Oversteegen drawled.

Michelle Henke restrained an urge to hit him over the head. It was difficult.

--------------------------

Satisfying, no? No!


I still claim that doesn't count as a snippet, because it occurs every day.
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Re: A Snippet from Toni on the bar (Shadow of Freedom)
Post by Gustav   » Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:58 pm

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aargh, I am desperate

Lunan wrote:If you look at the bar. Toni has promised us an entire chapter. Oh my...

Thirdbase wrote:
rdt wrote:Toni posted yet another meager:

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"Well, this is an interestin' development," Rear Admiral Michael Oversteegen drawled.

Michelle Henke restrained an urge to hit him over the head. It was difficult.

--------------------------

Satisfying, no? No!


I still claim that doesn't count as a snippet, because it occurs every day.
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